Movie Script Feedback & Studio Notes

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Perhaps a strange request but does anyone have the examples of detailed feedback that a screenplay might get from a studio?

For example here are the detailed notes Richard Rush's The Stunt Man got
http://www.scriptdrive.net/showthread.php?tid=986&highlight=Stunt
 
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I don't have it handy, but a David Koepp draft of the THE SHADOW floating around has studio coverage at the beginning.
 
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Headzo said:
I don't have it handy, but a David Koepp draft of the THE SHADOW floating around has studio coverage at the beginning.
Spot on! Thank you Headzo
http://www.scriptdrive.net/showthread.php?tid=294&pid=1169#pid1169

The finished film is OK but it's heartbreaking to read how enthusiastic the reader is for this witty and moving draft

And double heartbreaking that the reader suggests Tom Schiller (Nothing Lasts Forever) a very talented director who ended up only making one feature. Nobody would suggest him now

BentonEllicott said:
Here are the notes for Blade Runner:
Thanks Benton. The late Bud Yorkin & co really had it in for Ridley.
 
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Here's the Matrix coverage on an earlier draft where they hated it and was called a Terminator 2 ripoff :D . I put it up a while ago on WTR but bears repeating.
 
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